tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post4126749424785443443..comments2022-11-10T05:46:10.798-08:00Comments on An Aspiring Writer's Blog - Mandy Calvin's Quill: Throwing Away HeartMChttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14485627951969730089noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-66160996883562909002011-09-01T13:33:39.707-07:002011-09-01T13:33:39.707-07:00What a strong ending. I am so happy to read your p...What a strong ending. I am so happy to read your poem. I am new to the rally and here is what I tried today http://promisingpoetsparkinglot.blogspot.com/2011/08/agreement-for-thursday-poets-rally-week.htmlAnn LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-38055137971344753732011-08-31T11:26:53.224-07:002011-08-31T11:26:53.224-07:00You make your point - Destroying others to support...You make your point - Destroying others to support yourself always turns to self-destruction. <br />Thanks for the reminder.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-55241467862451067372011-08-31T07:31:35.229-07:002011-08-31T07:31:35.229-07:00with friends like this...who needs drama?with friends like this...who needs drama?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-23464568342375948402011-08-30T09:48:04.622-07:002011-08-30T09:48:04.622-07:00You've done an exceptional job at articulating...You've done an exceptional job at articulating your feelings in a way that others can completely relate to your logic. <br /><br />http://kaysalady.wordpress.com/2011/08/30/my-mind-is-frozen/Kayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14368539518339009833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-67579139967925862052011-08-30T08:13:50.107-07:002011-08-30T08:13:50.107-07:00Fitting picture for the poem. Regret does grow in...Fitting picture for the poem. Regret does grow into self-loathing and blame. Like mold on a shower, it easily appears and is more difficult to rid. Powerful emotions portrayed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-36197874488713415222011-08-27T21:24:28.882-07:002011-08-27T21:24:28.882-07:00Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination
Great...Very Nice Poetry with an amazing Imagination<br />Great Work of Creativity !! Highly Expressive !!<br /><br />It was indeed enjoyable after reading this one !!<br /><br />Anyways, Take a look some of my Poetry Collections …<br /><a rel="nofollow">http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/talent-underground/poetry-zone/</a><br /><br />some of my Haiku Collections<br /><a rel="nofollow">http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/category/creative-challenges/the-haiku-challenge/</a><br /><br />and also, on my very recent Work as well<br /><a rel="nofollow">http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2011/08/15/india-of-my-dream/</a><br /><br />!!! Happy Rally !!!<br />Cheers !!ASHISH BARDHANhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00142682162046807042noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-82995706715707295512011-08-27T07:58:57.894-07:002011-08-27T07:58:57.894-07:00Just wonderful on many levels.
Picture fits this ...Just wonderful on many levels.<br /><br />Picture fits this poem perfectly.California Ink in Motionhttp://themslvh.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-44795821962634017832011-08-26T12:19:59.020-07:002011-08-26T12:19:59.020-07:00Beautiful picture,and a well crafted poem!! keep u...Beautiful picture,and a well crafted poem!! keep up the good workAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-51706354784166318162011-08-26T09:55:59.971-07:002011-08-26T09:55:59.971-07:00awesome sentiments done.awesome sentiments done.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-78641225814918881002011-08-24T23:53:40.166-07:002011-08-24T23:53:40.166-07:00honest feelings portrayed,..honest feelings portrayed,..Rashmihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05294504967496661652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-34437146531598499122011-08-24T22:15:36.184-07:002011-08-24T22:15:36.184-07:00Nice work and a very dark truth.
AlcinaNice work and a very dark truth.<br /><br /><a href="http://reigningwanderer.blogspot.com/2011/08/consume.html" rel="nofollow">Alcina</a>Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-38370795919808254912011-08-24T16:16:41.697-07:002011-08-24T16:16:41.697-07:00very good. coolvery good. coolJesse.s.mitchellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07205953592757534769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-45340789037592987772011-08-24T13:50:06.660-07:002011-08-24T13:50:06.660-07:00It's so true how often we have to deal with se...It's so true how often we have to deal with self loathing when we break the promises we made to ourselves that we swore we'd never break. <br /><br />The image of the heart stuck with pins and nails is so very powerful, goes perfectly with your words.Miss Kittenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15783880640023106451noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-18632428941965101342011-08-12T11:48:29.175-07:002011-08-12T11:48:29.175-07:00Strong poem which is strongly written. I like the ...Strong poem which is strongly written. I like the use of both internal and end rhyme in these lines:<br /><br />'But the things done are not so worrisome<br />As admitting it to yourself or others<br />You rather degrade another to scum'Jack Edwards Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813177533690643652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-55997453407134574192011-08-07T11:27:22.467-07:002011-08-07T11:27:22.467-07:00Wow. Your disgust and anger clearly come through. ...Wow. Your disgust and anger clearly come through. I hope it had a healing effect.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-24724910711805941962011-08-07T11:05:34.923-07:002011-08-07T11:05:34.923-07:00honest and raw... great poem!honest and raw... great poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-69950849601820744062011-08-07T10:41:50.933-07:002011-08-07T10:41:50.933-07:00That picture is amazing. I'm without words.That picture is amazing. I'm without words.Nonnymonsterhttp://www.coffeewithleonardcohen.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-81077251175406120262011-08-07T10:15:12.281-07:002011-08-07T10:15:12.281-07:00Very strong ending.
Well composed.
My Pantry Poe...Very strong ending. <br />Well composed.<br /><br />My Pantry Poem: http://bit.ly/qRlO9sJess PJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10775984664764629241noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-82021198654820809852011-08-07T10:07:31.766-07:002011-08-07T10:07:31.766-07:00lovely logic on how things fail and more.
well don...lovely logic on how things fail and more.<br />well done poem.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9058624562224772474.post-91375054462038969112011-08-06T13:26:55.592-07:002011-08-06T13:26:55.592-07:00This is beautiful.This is beautiful.Chronicles of Illusionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16168156674895078729noreply@blogger.com